Analysis of Personal Essay
My essay is about letting go of guilt and realizing that ultimately things are out of your control. You can't live harboring the feeling that you could have changed the course of life, all the "what if's" can not change the past.
I am happy with the segments. I really like this style. I like the story itself and concept that I am trying to get across.
I dont know if my essay's focus is clear and concise, if the reader actually gets my personal message. My word choices can be better, with more imagry. Also I think it might be a bit confusing for the reader to understand the segments, I might have to throw something subtle for the reader to understand. My sister read it and said it was a bit unclear. Also I think the ending needs some work.
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